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hmmm....YES

maybe to use this for a scene in the dessert where you see a huge army gathering/attacking?
anyways,i liked it(especially because there are so few of these)

-Horakoeri

chills to the bone...

this reminds me of a scene from my book:

All i did was watch while the Zrumg-beam flew towards Alpha who was engaged in a dog-fight against some Screamers.
It kept closing in and i didn't say a word, goddamn, why couldn't I get a single damn word over my lips!
After several seconds the expected results occured, a huge blast, a scream through the communications channel and a huge star in the sky...
I opened my mouth but didn't say anything, i fell on my knees and punched the ground while i screamed.
I screamed for the loss of someone i hold dear, someone i had feelings for but couldn't show them.
Maybe...maybe it was possible in another life...
I lifted my head again to look at the explosion wich still didn't stop to expand and noticed a small particle-like debris falling.
"Kyoti!!!" I screamed while running towards the place it would crash, I still don't know how i found the strength to scream.
It changed course and flew closer towards me, even so close it almost had hit me.
I ran to the crater wich it had made and saw Alpha there in several bits.
It's head was mostly molten, it's right arm was ripped off and it's whole lower body was gone.
as i came closer i felt tears going over my cheeks, my suit AI reported that the suit was getting filled with a humanoid substance, i shutted her down to get rid of her senseless talks for this moment.
I stood before Alpha and saw blood coming out from the lower parts of the suit.
I threw my gun on the ground and opened the chest of Alpha and saw Kyoti there, covered in blood, her lower body was missing...
I fell on my knees again and started to say her name in an attempt to wake her up.
as i was considering to give up she coughed up some blood and said my name.
"Enak, I...I order you to..." she started to say.
"I order you to...save your wife...go...!" she said.
"No...i can't leave you..." i replied.
"You idiot! stop caring so much! i know, i loved you...but look at me! i'm dying, can you change that!!?" She yelled at me.
I didn't say anything.
"...go...that's...an order..." she released her final breath saying that line.
i closed her eyes and thought to myself.
Why...?
Why couldn't i save them...?
I'm the last of HADES...
I promised them all that their deaths wouldn't be in vein...
But when i die, it will be...our tale will end here, nobody will ever hear of us...
I looked towards Kyoti's lifeless body again.
Maybe in another life they would have survived...i thoguht to myself...
I took my gun and walked away, back to finish this last fight...
A fight agaisnt all odds...
A fight that has to be stopped...
A fight that will take a great toll...
A fight that will change the outcome of the war...

Your works inspires me to write, keep it up
Your sincerely,

-Horakoeri(a fan, drawer and writer)

my try at a background story...

before reading just know that this will be for a book i'm writing and you can go fck urself if you hate it... :/ (luv your work peter <3 )

It was a strange feeling, to come back to this place.
Grim Island, the place where my story began.
All of it's systems have been infected by that damn AI.
The Killzone now counts for everyone, Watchdog has gone insane and doesn't respond to our orders anymore.
The only way into the BMI(Bureau of Militairy Intelligence)Crinolian HQ is by following the MHT(Magnetic Hovering Train)track during the time it passes by.
But will Isirus see through the lie...? Will she stop us...? Will we be able to stop her...?
All of these questions flew through my head as a cruiser at FTL speed...
"Enak, this isn't the time to get doubts. This is the time to act! Think about all of those deaths that Isirus already made! What will happen if she gets of the island...? Will she spread through Crinolis...? Will that be the end of her rampage...!!? She can spread throughout the whole goddamn universe! There is no time! We have to stop her here!" Kyoti shouted.
I nodded my head and realised he was right, there is no more time...and the time that will come will change depending on the choices i make today...
I wonder if anybody ever realises what burden i have on my shoulder, saving the galaxy from the Yhang empire that is planning to strike soon, trying to unite all species in an attempt to stop the Yhang and try to sterilize the Parasite's or destroy the Black Crusaders who are bringing them in...
Every choice i have to make will result in billions of casualty's...every choice i don't make will result in the destruction of our galaxy...
*they check their weapons once more*
"This is it! The moment to recapture the BMI HQ! If we complete this mission we'll get our communications back online and warn the fleets on the incoming attacks! I aint a believer but i hope God is on our side on this one." Captain Yorick yelled.
*The HMT departed and soon reached it's top speed*
I closed my eyes and saw my fellow team members who died during our previous missions, I promised them their deaths wouldn't be in vein.
But it is becoming harder by the day to keep that promise.
*The train is nearing the BMI HQ*
But i just know, I know that their death won't be in vein...

Hope you enjoyed it :D
Yours sincerely,

-Horakoeri(fan of PS's music, drawer and a book writer)

EvilRaccoon responds:

Im amazed that you could see such a narrative within AE Evolved. Thats some detail you go in to! Really enjoyed it. Wow!

:D Thanks for story!

great

i feel stupid for never having taken the time to check your audio list completaly,only now i see how much potential many of your songs have.
you also know how to describe the background storys for your song :)

-Horakoeri(a new fan and fellow writer)

HonorOfStyle responds:

Fellow Writer??? :D :D :D!!! Awesome!!! I'll wanna talk more in the future bout this! Nice!
Thanks too for the compliments! Up until now nobody has said anything bout the back storys on many of my newer songs, including this one. I was almost beginning to doubt whether it was worth the time to post. I suppose I shouldn't have doubted it after all. Thanks!

feedback

there,ya have it know XD
nah,jk,jk...its pretty good but the ending could have been more of a climax

hmhhh...

<:O scary sounds everywhere.
would fit in a scene where there are some flood-zerg combined monsters lurking in the shadows waiting for someone to bestupid enough to get too close to the darkness...

SFaPiL2 responds:

Thanks for the 10. That pretty much sums up what I was thinking ^_^.

good for a trailer

and some other stuff.
like a halo-like cmmercial about a war veteran being interviewed and talking about one of the greatest heroes who died during a intergalactic war...the persin who died was not only a hero...he was a symbol,a symbol representing hope in the darkest of hours...it was because of him that everyone kept fighting,even against all odds...he shall be missed by the HAN(Human Alliance Nova),the galactic civilization and...he will be missed by everyone...

Make more epic music >XD

-Horakoeri

awesum!

this would play perfectly at the moment before a battle.
troops inspect their guns and vehicles before leaving their ships and enter the fight...

-Horakoeri

yupyup ^^

great piece of music :D
it gave me a feeling that the Grim Reaper was around the corner :S

-Horakoeri

it's like...

...this sound fits at a scene wich shows the last moments of a great (anti-)hero...
also i noticed it loops great :D

-Horakoeri

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